But I've to say that if I have to choose one of the many technological advances of our times, the winner will definitely be the computer..
I love computers, they're the best machine of all, you can do everything in/with them.
-write
-draw
-work
-desing
-create/listen music
-surf on the net
-contact your friends
-and the hell of a lot of more things
Well, my relationship with computers go waaaaaay back to the time when I was a little child (actually there was a computer in my home before I ever born, but that's a different story).. But I think -I'm not totally sure about it- that I get the first computer that was really mine when I was -like- 11(?) years old, and my dad was who gave it to me..
I actually use my computer to do EVERYTHING.. I'm pretty sure that if I lost it -for any reason- I would be in really deep trouble.. I write in it, I do my college works in it, I desing websites in it, I draw and paint in it, I read in it, I study in it, I contact my friends trought it, I surf in the net trought it, I listen to music in it, resuming I kinda live trought it..
I use my computer almost every day -there has to happen something really weird to keep me far from it-, and in the weekends I can spend the whole day on it..
Well, i think that I'd left pretty clear -by telling how do I use my computer- that my life would be a mess if I didn't have my pc, I mean, I know that I'll be able to keep living, but certainly, do all things I like to do would be waaaaaay more difficult.. And I think that that's why I love it: 'cause it make my life much easier..
Gabriela,
ResponderEliminarThat’s a very good post, very original and personal with many well written sentences. Of course if wou were to write a formal essay you would need to change the register, which is too informal at times, (but then maybe it wouldn’t be quite Gabriela’s style?) Keep up the good job.
My dear computer
Well It happens to be that I'm a freakin' tech psycho and I love all about technology..
But I've to say that if I have to choose one of the many technological advances of our times, the winner will definitely be the computer..
I love computers, they're the best machine of all, you can do everything in/with them.
Really, you can:-write-draw-work-desiNG-create/listen TO music-surf on the net-contact your friends-and the hell of a lot of more things
Well, my relationship with computers goES waaaaaay back to the time when I was a little child (actually there was a computer in my home before I WAS ever born, but that's a different story).. But I think -I'm not totally sure about it- that I GOT the first computer that was really mine when I was -like- 11(?) years old, and IT WAS my dad who gave it to me..
I actually use my computer to do EVERYTHING.. I'm pretty sure that if I lost it -for any reason- I would be in really deep trouble.. I write ON it, I do my college ASSIGNMENTs ON it, I desing websites ON it, I draw and paint ON it, I read FROM it, I study FROM/WITH it, I contact my friends trought it, I surf the net WITH it, I listen to music FROM it, resuming I kinda live trought it..
I use my computer almost every day -there has to happen something really weird to keep me far from it-, and AT/ON the weekends I can spend the whole day on it..
Well, i think that I'd left pretty clear -by telling how (-) I use my computer- that my life would be a mess if I didn't have my pc, I mean, I know that I'D be able to keep living, but certainly, doING all things I like to do would be waaaaaay more difficult.. And I think that that's why I love it: 'cause it makeS my life much easier.
a) To make it clear/emphasize the fact that a specific person and not another one did something you say: It was X who/that said.../gave me.../has.../will come.../etc.
Ex. It was Mario Vargas Llosa that wrote ‘The city and the dogs’, not Gabriel García Marquez as you said...